Hi there,
I am Amine, 18 years old, I am from Bouira and I live currently in Algiers. I am a first year student in the ENS "department of English" (freshman).
I am going to bore you a little with my likes and dislikes. First, my likes are : recent technologies ( I am a tech-head), fast cars (especially lamborghini), drawing and football of course.
My likes :
Second, my dislikes are: lying, saying wrong things about me (things i don't really do or that are not a part of my character), gossip, the brand "Apple" and the nonsense fashion.
My dislikes :
"Amine Ace"
hello amine in the bigining i would lik to say that i really liked what you wrote and i think that we are sharing the same valeuse because i also like the recent thecnologien , fast cars,football,and the wwe raw .now lets move to the second part you use the transition very well and the fulstops in the right place the only thing that you didn't respect is that you didn't capitaliz prnoun ,propernoun and you didn't use to mush of of academic words that's it .good job and i wish you all the best cryon
ReplyDeleteYoo! men it's nice,all what you love but is nice but seriously why don't you like the Firm "Apple" ,nonetheless i find you writing very great and well organized just one advice you need to add some adverbs and adjectives to your writing in order to make it more interesting for us the readers ok
ReplyDeleteI hope that it's gonna help you and i'm looking to hearing about you very soon.