Manchester United, The Red Devils, is the best team in the English Premiere League. The Dream Team is surrounded by a lot of circumstances that made it in the lead. First, Sir Alex Ferguson, Manager, is the brain of the team with all the experience within the whole last 27 years. He made some excellent decisions at emergency times. Second, the shocking squad, which has hunted many titles and trophies among centuries.The present composition is: De Gea, Ferdinand, Rafael, Smalling, Evra, Carrick, Kagawa, Nani, Rooney, Persie ,and Wlbeck.
Third, fans of The Theatre Of Dreams, who are a huge support and motivation for the first team in order to doubles its effort on the green rectangle. Finally, those conditions were the biggest reasons for MAN UTD during the road to the sommet.
<<Sir Alex, the pride of United.>>
"Amine Ace"
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ReplyDeletefirst of all I have found a spelling mistake, but it apt to you to find it that's about the grammar
ReplyDeleteHowever now about the writing way, and the skills you used like the representation of the team was good but, when i started to read i thought that it's gonna a be an argumentation for way the M.U are the Dream team but it found out to be a description and explanation more then anything else in addition you have not connected your sentences properly like you really have to learn to work with the conjunctions.
Finally i haven't understood where the end of this paragraph start.This is why I strongly advise you to read your text before sharing it and ask your self what can theme blame me for
Before all, I want to raed something deffrent for you. why do you write only sports subjects ?
ReplyDeleteThen, you maked one spelling mistake and you should correct it
That's all what I have notice in your essay ,and I wish that you write better then this in your next try.
well in the begining i would like to saye that you did a god job but the only mistak that i have notice is that you used third then finally and that is wrong because third equall finally that's it and good look in next tim
ReplyDeletewhy u make here like big profesors amine is arab not american or britain hahaha
ReplyDeletehi amine,you can't use third and finally at the same time choose one of them also i think it is better to reform this sentence *fans of The Theatre Of Dreams, who are a huge support and motivation that make the first team doubles its effort*
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